English, 18.08.2021 05:10 bluexorsit7603

Read this paragraph from a news story: The city's Civic Club is collecting gently used eyeglasses and hearing aids again this year for its annual "Good Neighbors" project. Last year, the club collected fans and walkers. Club president Leo Niles says that donated items will be cleaned, repaired, and then shipped to people abroad in other countries.

Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the paragraph while maintaining meaning?

The city's Civic Club is collecting gently used eyeglasses and hearing aids for its annual "Good Neighbors" project. Club president Leo Niles says that donated items will be cleaned, repaired, and then shipped to people abroad.
The city's Civic Club is collecting gently used eyeglasses and hearing aids again this year for its annual "Good Neighbors" project. Club president Leo Niles says that donated items will be cleaned, repaired, and then shipped to people abroad in other countries.
The city's Civic Club is collecting gently used eyeglasses and hearing aids again this year for its "Good Neighbors" project. Last year, the club collected fans and walkers. Club president Leo Niles says that donated items will be shipped to people in other countries.
The city's Civic Club is collecting gently used eyeglasses and hearing aids for its annual "Good Neighbors" project. Last year, the club collected fans and walkers. Club president Leo Niles says that donated items will be cleaned, repaired, and then shipped to people in other countries.

Answers: 1

Show answers

Other questions on the subject: English

English, 21.06.2019 14:30, grandpianograce

The following passage is an example of what type of text structure tornados are caused by unstable air interacting with the wind sheer the resulting formation can cause devastating effects

Answers: 1

continue

English, 21.06.2019 17:00, cookies1164

Read this excerpt from holes. at the time, elya thought nothing of the curse. he was just a fifteen-year-old kid, and “eternity” didn’t seem much longer than a week from tuesday. besides, he liked madame zeroni and would be glad to carry her up the mountain. he would have done it right then and there, but he wasn’t yet strong enough. how does this section of the flashback relate to stanley? a. elya was much older during his difficult time than stanley was during his. b. elya’s physical weakness parallels stanley’s physical weakness. c. elya, like stanley, lives in the moment and does not consider the future. d. elya, like stanley, likes the character who is giving him a hard time.

Answers: 1

continue

English, 21.06.2019 21:30, joe1591

Which excerpt is told from third-person point of view? o a. i walked slowly along the canal and said aloud to myself, "emma, what are you doing here? " b. you walked slowly along the canal and said aloud to yourself, "i have no idea what i'm doing here. c. emma walked sidly along the canal and said aloud to herself. "i don't have a clue what i'm doing here." d. walking slowly along the canal. i said aloud to myself, "emma, you have no idea what you're doing here.

Answers: 2

continue

English, 21.06.2019 23:10, cjacobs77311

2read this passage from "the raven." what is puzzling the speaker in this stanza? 60% but the raven still beguiling my sad fancy into smiling, straight i wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird, and bust and door then, upon the velvet sinking, i betook myself to linking fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore- what this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt and ominous bird of yore meant in croaking "nevermore." s and what the raven's message is why the raven came to visit where the raven came from how the raven got into his room

Answers: 3

continue

You know the right answer?

Read this paragraph from a news story: The city's Civic Club is collecting gently used eyeglasses a...