What would be a better ending for the book "A Wrinkle In Time"?(should be eight (8) sentences or more.

How are the characters of tablin and keyn revealed in this excerpt from "the guard" by simon dunbar? a. indirectly through dialogue and by thoughts and actions b. directly through a narrative description c. indirectly through dialogue "where's my horse? " keyn asked. tablin looked around the dirt courtyard. he tried to peer through the shadowy arches of the flowing barrel. he even twisted in his saddle to look across the merchant's bazaar, past tents and warehouses filled with goods. "i don't know," he said. "did you leave it in your mouth? it's the only place i can think of that's big enough." keyn laughed; something got stuck in his throat half way, and he coughed for breath. "i can see you're good to go,” tablin observed as keyn struggled to clear his throat. “go get your horse yourself before i take the job and leave you to rot in the flowing barrel."

Which of these sentences uses parallel structure

Making a story about a myfwa(wolf and human) this is what i have is it good? my name is sylvia stone its been years since bunny's trusted us wolves and its stupid how this on bunny sellina bully's me only because i threatend to eat her years before we trusted each so mabey u might say she deserves revange is say i kill her once we start war harsh? ? if it is i dint give a single heck about it. plz tell me what to fix and u can edit it if u would like the pic is what i want her to look like i didn't want to show her face yet.