There is one mistake in each sentence. Underline and correct the mistake. 1. Sitting close to the laptop’s screen hurt your eyes.
2. You can avoid many diseases by eat healthy food.
3. You look so bad! How’s wrong with you?
4. Eating lots of fast food can make you fat or obesity.
5. Eating more fruit and vegetables to get vitamins, minerals, fiber.
6. Good nutrition is a important part of leading a healthy lifestyle.
7. Watch more television; if not, your eyes will be tired.
8. I’ve drunk three glasses of beer, but I’ve got a headache.

1. Sitting close to the laptop's screen hurt your eyes.

2. You can avoid many diseases by eat healthy food.

3. You look so bad! How's wrong with you?

4. Eating lots of fast food can make you fat or obesity.

5. Eating more fruit and vegetables to get vitamins, minerals, fiber.

6. Good nutrition is a important part of leading a healthy lifestyle.

7. Watch more television; if not, your eyes will be tired.

8. I've drunk three glasses of beer, but I've got a headache.

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.

(you didn't attach a copy of the poem, but i'm answering as best as i can)

since a simile compares two unlike things using like or as, it kind of gives an item the ability to do something it can't.

example: "the player was like a tiger on the field"

in this sentence, the simile conveys the idea that the player was fast and strong, like a tiger.