I got 11 out of 15, and I feel like it's not accurate so I'm paying to get it re-marked, do you think I deserved to lose 4 points? Check the picture,
the “grading criteria “:

Proper Essay Division : 3

Relevance: 2

Proper Idea Development:3

Grammar: 3

Spelling: 1

Punctuation:2

Transition words & Phrases:1

Total :15

I know I had two mistakes (your instead of you're, and on the other hands instead of on the other hand) but those are spelling mistakes and spelling has 1 point only so I feel like losing half a point is fair maybe?

Plz which statement best describes the motivation of the character pahom in leo tolstoy’s story “how much land does a man need”

4. at the conclusion of frankenstein, robert walton has an encounter with the monster, who arrives after victor frankenstein has died. perhaps surprisingly, the monster mourns his creator and expresses remorse over the fate that victor suffered. the monster pledges to destroy himself and then departs, disappearing as he goes further north. how does the monster’s behavior and attitude in this part of the novel affect the way readers view him? is he sympathetic? is he more hateful because it is only after victor has died that he relents? how does the change in the monster fit with the theme of duality in the novel?

When the author quotes the actress sarah brown as saying, i truly believe that this film gives an important message to audiences, the author is using a) repetition. b) a testimonial. c) an ethical appeal. d) the bandwagon method.