Can someone help me rewrite, refine, and tighten up each sentence using the focus strategies? This is called Sentence Focus

1.By using the appropriate oil in your older car, it will run better.

2. There is a lot of repetitive practice required to become an accomplished musician.

on a cabin, which was on a boat, (that looked like a paper cruise), we were all on a trip and an example of one word to describe it was 'amazing' as we all had a party (almost like the one i had previously had at a house of my friend's) and we played games with a bag, a box and a letter!

sorry, i could only think of one sentence, check it before you use the sentence because it is important that it is up to your standards.

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sugar had three basic uses in ancient india. it was used in religious rites, consumed as a snack, and was considered a kind of medicine.

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english novelist and poet, the eldest of the three brontë sisters who survived into adulthood and whose novels became classics of english literature.

she enlisted in school at roe head in january 1831, aged 14 years. she left the year after to teach her sisters, emily and anne, at home, returning in 1835 as a governess. in 1839 she undertook the role as governess for the sidgwick family, but left after a few months to return to haworth where the sisters opened a school, but failed to attract pupils. instead they turned to writing and they each first published in 1846 under the pseudonyms of currer, ellis and acton bell. her first novel the professor was rejected by publishers, her second novel jane eyre was published in 1847. the sisters admitted to their bell pseudonyms in 1848, and by the following year were celebrated in london literary circles.

brontë experienced the early deaths of all her siblings. she became pregnant shortly after her marriage in june 1854 but died on 31 march 1855, almost certainly from hyperemesis gravidarum, a complication of pregnancy which causes excessive nausea and vomiting.

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