Select the correct text in the passage. Which sentence in this message identifies it as a persuasive claim?

/I wrote to you earlier about the problems with my car’s speedometer/. / Please check your records, as well as those for similar models/. / I can demonstrate the performance of the speedometer on my vehicle/. /I propose that we meet next Monday for a demonstration. /I’m sure you will be able to see the difference. The purchase receipt for my vehicle is enclosed.

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the sun warms our planet, and with the moon, creates the tides. the moon orbits the earth and in turn, the earth orbits the sun. because they appear to be the same size in the sky, the sun, earth and moon work together to create eclipses. when the moon is directly in between the earth and sun

you have so far written an informative essay (if you haven't then you might want to do that. look back at the lesson for guidance) answer the question but is it the best conclusion it can be? does it properly summarize the main subtopics of your essay? does it state in one or two sentences the “so what” of your topic. if your topic was abraham lincoln, your essay shouldn’t be just about abraham lincoln. it should answer, “so what about abraham lincoln? ”

revise your conclusion

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