The balloon rocketed up into the icy air. We were frightened because it was moving quickly. However, the
balloon was completely safe in the end.
Which revisions did you make? Select all that apply.
O I used stronger adjectives and adverbs.
O I eliminated repetition in the description.
O I used more vivid verbs.
O I used more specific nouns.

it would be d because the however is more proper and the comma is placed in the right spot

the chosen symbology is the 'sweet secret' which anna confesses on january 6th.

anne's thoughts on her mother are further indication of her growing maturity and of her feelings of isolation from her mother.

the homoeroticism of this passage led it to be excluded from early editions of the journal. this passage shows anne's simultaneous innocense about and fascination with sex. she's clearly aware and unafraid of being sexual, but at the same time is seemingly unaware that her homosexual feelings could be considered taboo back then.

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