Some please help me please it’s a test

If you give me the two excerpts to compare, i would be able to you : )

It would be a lot easier if you did this yourself, imagine yourself as a reporter. reporters are very vigilant, wordy, smart people that don't take no for an answer, just simply put together a little story about yourself that would include places you've reported, things you've witnessed, people you've talked to and about to support your evidence, but it's all hypothetical so it's really easy to make it all up