Can someone correct me this pleasseee will give you brain lest

your explanation is fluent from the first to the middle ,but start from the middle upto the end your message became redundant (ex. cheap/you just used that word repeatedly , if you can't avoid to use it you can just replace it with other word ,so it won't sounds redundant) .you've just double the word (their)/The message is that their their competitor.../you forgot to put a parenthesis on (dont) it is (don't

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i hope you can consider my observation,btw you've done a nice work