Re-read this paragraph from an informational article about early movements to improve life for Americans with intellectual disabilities. As movie stars, singers, and entertainers, the Rogers family touched the lives of millions of Americans. However, for a generation of parents with children who had mental or physical challenges like Downs syndrome, Roger’s tale of love and faith in the memoir Angel Unaware was far more influential; it inspired them to be proud of their children, no matter their challenges, and to find hope in their strengths. According to this excerpt, what role does being a prominent celebrity play in creating cultural shifts? Only famous people can become a voice for marginalized people, and few are willing to speak up.

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars. which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone