How can I use precise language to make my narrative more engaging?​

Precise language: A vocabulary of precise nouns and vivid verbs helps you create strong mental pictures and avoid wordiness. Concise language: Using the fewest possible words without sacrificing meaning makes your writing more understandable

10 Techniques for More Precise Writing

Use Active Voice. When a sentence includes be or any other copulative verb, such as is or are, recast the sentence to omit the verb. ...

Avoid Vague Nouns. ...

Use Words, Not Their Definitions. ...

Avoid Noun Strings. ...

Convert Nouns to Verbs. ...

Reduce Verb Phrases to Simple Verbs. ...

Replace Complex Words with Simple Ones. ...

Avoid Expletives.

they insisted that there was not enough time to learn everything.  

explanation:

if they were going to steal the answers that is simply because they insisted that there was not enough time to learn everything.  

that is literally a whole assignment and i'm not sure anyone in their right mind or even wrong mind is going to do an entire assignment for someone just for 100 points on a website. sorry to tell you like