I need help bad please

1. We will move the party from the deck into the house if the neighbors complain about the noise being too loud.
2. I listen to rock but Matt prefers reggae, which happens to have some pretty talented artist such as Bob Marley.
3. The grass has turned brown because it can no longer receive any nutrients.
1. When fall comes in the north, the leaves turn red and autumn begins.
2. I tried on the new jacket that Edna gave me but, I couldn’t fit it so I told her thanks for keeping me in mind but returned it to her.
3. After we have lunch, Dad will rake the leaves or wash his car.

Ithink that story needs some revising. hmm some academic language perhaps? and sylvia is but i do think that rainbow is spectacular