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The text I chose is a mango shaped space by Wendy Mass. I have a personal connection to this book because this girl who has a condition feels like she is the only person in the world to deal with it. I feel sometimes that I am the only person to deal with things that happen in my life. One day she finds a group that she can fit into with her same connection, and I can connect to this because I have found a group that supports me through my circumstances. As she grows I feel myself grow because reminds me I am only human and will go through tough times.

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waves come crashing to grey sullen shores.

powerful and strong, it breathes and roars.

cascading and caressing each grain of sand,

a warm embrace between sea and land.

high above, a seagull soars high.

wings of purity it spreads to fly.

battling high against darkened cloud,

in a wind that blows fiercely, flying graceful and proud.

beneath, the sand is soft and warm.

sculpted by nature, it's weathered the storm.

a passionate battle between calmness and rage,

a new chapter's beginning; don't turn the last page.

i listen again to the whispering waves,

music of nature calming and brave.

its power unknown, its stillness untamed,

mysterious and magical, a treasure earth claims.

plz mark brainliest

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