Please help lots of points Revise the narrative by adding in transitional words, phrases, and clauses. Add details to make the writing more interesting as well. Copy and paste the original text below to edit the story. Success Criteria:

At least 4 transitional words, phrases, or clauses added to the story: 4 points

Interesting or clarifying details added that were not in the original story: 4 points

Writing conventions: 2 points

Total 10 points

Frankie and Sam had to get ready for the big game. They went to the dry cleaner to pick up their uniforms. They tuned their instruments. They went to the football field. The football game started. They sat on the bench and waited for halftime. The game stopped. They got in the line formation with the others. They played ,"We Will Rock You". The audience cheered.