Can someone fix this poem to make it better? (This is for my sister lol)

The year is coming to an end, I can’t believe it’s true.
Before we know it, We’ll be moving onto somewhere new.

It seems like only yesterday we entered 5th grade
Think of all the fun we’ve had, and all the progress we’ve made

We studied things like math, reading, and writing
We also learned to do our best and to solve disagreements without arguing.

We played at recess on the monkey bars and slides
We hoped we wouldn’t misbehave and have to sit out on the side.

We’ve grown as learners and as friends but now it’s time to go.
Thanks!

However, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. what would be the best way to revise this sentence for greater clarity? a) however, the fact that columbus left spain thousands of years after people settled what would become the united states never dawned on me. b) it never dawned on me, however, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain. c) however, the fact that people were already living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. d) however, the idea never dawned on me that long before columbus ever left spain, real-life people lived for thousands of years in what would become the united states.

Which term best describes the progressive era

Langston hughes cited walt whitman as one of his greatest influences and some believe that hughes wrote "i, too, sing america" in response to whitman's "i hear america singing." using on whitman's poem. consider aspects such as structure, there, word, choice, etc., as you craft your response. your response will be scored on how well you: -demonstrate your understanding of the ideas of the text -use evidence from the text to develop and support your ideas -organize your response in a logical manner -demonstrate an appropriate writing style through the use of precise word choice and varied sentences -use standard conventions for writing