Swamptown is a city in Louisiana located near the ocean. The city becomes flooded almost every year after hurricanes pass through. Half of the city is protected by wetlands -- swampy areas between the ocean and dry land. The wetlands are home to many plants and animals that can’t live anywhere else. Daniel from the Acme Construction company wants to remove the wetlands and replace them with houses. Naomi, a conservation biologist, argues that Daniel shouldn’t do this. Naomi thinks the people in Swamptown should protect the wetlands.

You go to the library and find the following map and graph that shows what happens to Swamptown after a hurricane

MAKE THIS IN TO YOUR OWN SENTENCE WITH CER

Daniel from the Acme Construction company wants to remove the wetlands and replace them with houses. Naomi, a conservation biologist, argues that Daniel shouldn’t do this. Naomi thinks the people in Swamptown should protect the wetlands.

Explanation:

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.