Title of the essay is: ALL I REALLY NEED TO KNOW I LEARNED IN KINDERTARTEN questions:
1. what is thr essay's title
2. when is the essays published
3. who is the intended audience of the essay
4. what background knowledge did the author provide in the essay
5. what is the authors main purpose in writing?what message does he want to convey?
6. what examples did the author give to suppport or elaborate his message or claim?
7. is the authors clain biased?why or why not?
8. is the structure of the essay easy to follow? does the writer clearly indicate transitions between ideas? expalin briefly.
9.is the authora word choice easy to understand?why or why not?
10. what do you think of the author's attitude presented in the essay? does he sound learned and entertaining? or does he soud boring and offensive? explain briefly.
11. what does the writer most need to develope further? what recommendation would you give to the writer?

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Me asap it's an e2020 test and it's timedread the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united statesis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars. what revision would most strengthen sentence 1?