Poor must be helped by rich? is it correct?

What excerpt from a student essay maintains the most objective tone

Which revision of the sentence most effectively incorporates the literary term characterized?

Which change should be made to improve this sentence? allen jumped in the puddle and his new shoes got wet and muddy. a)the new shoes got wet and muddy and allen jumps in the puddle. b)allen jumped in the puddle and got his new shoes wet and muddy. c)allen jumped in the puddle and gets his new shoes wet and muddy. d)the new shoes are getting wet and muddy and allen jumped in the puddle.