PROOFREAD MY ESSAY PLEASE!!! I just ask some of y'all to read this essay and tell me what to fix. The read should not be long and will link it below. Please provide useful commentary applies to the essay. I will give brainleist to the answers that are the most helpful. For reference, I am a sophomore and this is my argumentative essay. Thank You So Much!

a compare and contrast essay is a piece of formal writing in which the author focus on the similarities between two ideas, objects, places, etc., and the differences between them. there are some aspects that the author should take into account when he/she is crafting the essay. first, the author has a clear idea of the effect that he/she wants to produce on the audience (a purpose). his/her main idea should be presented in the thesis statement in a simple but effective way which gives the audience a clear idea of the content and the direction of the essay. in addition, it is also important to focus to the similarities and differences that not only are interesting and relevant to the reader but also provide a new, impressive point of view or deeper understanding of a topic.

this is hard!