May someone please give me the best way to turn this into an interesting hook. I had many people proofread it and they all said it was weak. "The new craze for self-driving cars has flooded the market by storm. Many automotive companies are developing the technology to be the first to promote an entire self-driving vehicle on today's roads. There is a catch. As much as these cars sound incredible, they are not how people perceive them."

As many of us have noticed, Self driving cars are flooding our highways. They are amazing, there incredible. Blah Blah Blah. There not. There like Propaganda almost. The companies that are selling these self driving cars are making these cars look so enticing, it makes adults feel like a kind in a candy store; but what these companies aren't telling you are the hazards of them. Follow with me as I tell you why.

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