Read the excerpt from Chapter 3 of Wheels of Change Why was the Rational Dress Society formed?
In 1881, as women in the United States continued to
struggle with hoops and corsets and other fashion
architecture, their counterparts in England formed the
Rational Dress Society. This society called for more
reasonable clothing solutions, including limiting the
weight of a woman's undergarments to seven pounds.
O to advocate for more functional cycling and athletic
gear for women
O to push for more beautiful, intricate styles of clothing
for women
to encourage English women to dress differently
than American women
to promote safer, more comfortable styles of dress
for women
Mom

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

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step-by-step explanation:

im sure you mean write *

man i love you so much

have a good day

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