“So, then it was, like, my turn to try the new machine thingy. It was, ummm, so sweet!” Identify the problem language in this statement and then rewrite the statement to correct the problem.

Problem words: like, ummm, and thingy

Explanation:

Rewrite it:

So then it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!

To re-put it you can say, "Then, it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!"

Explanation:

The original way they put it had to many commas

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the speech this question is referring to is president kennedy's special message to the congress on urgent national needs, may 25, 1961

kennedy responds in a very direct and concrete way to those thinking that communism is a positive system:

"yet their aggression is more often concealed than open. they have fired no missiles; and their troops are seldom seen. they send arms, agitators, aid, technicians and propaganda to every troubled area. but where fighting is required, it is usually done by others--by guerrillas striking at night, by assassins striking alone--assassins who have taken the lives of four thousand civil officers in the last twelve months in vietnam alone--by subversives and saboteurs and insurrectionists, who in some cases control whole areas inside of independent nations." (kennedy)

president kennedy presents communism as cowardly, as a hidden and treacherous weapon that strikes from the shadows like thieves, he represents the system as not even being capable of showing and open and overt attack or confrontation. to finish up the response, he expresses that the system attacks even a country's idependence and freedom.