Is this a good poem if not what can i improve?

It is a good Poem...

Explanation:

Improve the rhyme scheme, if you want to, because it is free-flow at the moment. Throw in a few idioms to make the imagery more vivid.

i think they are preparing for the battle of gaul. : )

i hope this you! : )

question: write a short paragraph essay of what should you do if you are being cyberbullied.

answer: if i wer cyberbullied i would at first try to stop it and settle it out with the person but if they didnt i probaly would be scared to tell somebody so i would probaly not tell anyone but when it gets out of hand i told my parents and they settled it with the child and told them to quit but they didnt so i told them stop but they didnt untill my mom saw a rude message they sent me and called the cops so it got settled and i forgave the person and now were freinds.

personal experiance

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