I need some advice and/or opinions on my thesis statement of the essay i am doing for the book The Chrysalids. I'm following the event+response=outcome

the essay is about how do individuals respond to fear of change btw

thesis: In the novel, "The Chrysalids", by John Wyndham, the author develops the idea that when individuals fear change it causes conflicts and lack of acceptance, which results in living in constant violence and concern of their lives, leading to the isolation and struggles that they ultimately face.​

this is actually really good, it highlights the fact that fear puts a halt on a individuals lives and kind of creates a panic. I think its amazing !

Explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

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