Read the sentence. At this present time it has become important to educate ourselves and learn about the multiple ways people, like you and I, can do things to protect the planet Earth from pollution and litter. Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence? Now, it is important for people like you and I to educate ourselves about pollution and litter so we can protect planet Earth. At the present time, it is important for people to protect the planet Earth from pollution. Right now, it is important to educate ourselves about the ways and things people can do to protect planet Earth from polluting litter. Now, it is important to learn ways people can protect the planet from pollution.

Read the sentence

"At this present time it has become important to educate ourselves and learn about the multiple ways people, like you and I, can do things to protect the planet Earth from pollution and litter."

Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?

irving effectively uses emotional responses to create suspense in the story.irving’s tone creates expectations for the reader, which in turn create suspense.irving’s suspense would have been more effective with more vivid details.irving’s story is not suspenseful

for this, you need to remember something significant in your own life, for example, if you were bullied when you were younger, you can mention your memories on this and touch on how such treatment can harm other kids your age either physically or mentally. (racism, car crashes, a parent in the hospital are all very good subjects, think hard on it! )

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