Which of the following revised sentences best eliminates wordiness? a.
correct as written
b.
In the next few days, the bus company should announce the new schedule.
c.
The new schedule from the bus company is expected to be possibly posted in the next few days.
d.
The bus company will expect an announcement of its schedule during the next few days.

Please select the best answer from the choices provided

A
B
C
D

The answer I think is correct is B.

Explanation:

I think this one is correct because this makes more sense then the rest, there is a coma ofc, but it also says that the bus company is going to announce their new schedule in the next few days because they shouldn't take too long to announce their bus company. Hopefully this helps you.

i have read the novel roll of thunder hear my cry by mildred d. taylor.

1. this isn't like any other story i've read or watched because it is about a black family in mississippi right after slavery in the u.s. had become illegal. most of the novels i have read were about slavery. another point is that the author of the novel used symbolism in a way i haven't seen before. for example she uses thunder as something negative meaning something bad will happen. but by the end of the novel, she made thunder a good thing.

2.   one character that changed during the novel was stacey. stacey is the eldest child of the black logan family. around the begging of the novel stacey was avoiding the white boy jeremy simms. he had a dislike for jeremy's family. but at the end of the novel stacey began to like jeremy.

3. the author starts the novel with the problem that the children of the logan family have to avoid the white kid school bus while walking to school.

first one is your answer

~coco