Read the excerpt from a report.
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English, 22.04.2021 22:30 stephen4438
Which revision improves the professional tone of the
text?
Read the excerpt from a report.
(1) Stopping trash before it gets to the ocean is way
better than having to clean it up in the ocean. (2) The
city of Baltimore has a large machine called Mr. Trash
Wheel. (3) The machine is powered by the sun and the
flow of the river. (4) Floating booms off the front of the
machine funnel garbage toward a conveyor belt. (5)
The belt takes the garbage from the water and puts it in
a dumpster. (6) The trash wheel helps collect garbage
in the river after it flows out into the ocean.
Change sentence 1 to: "Preventing garbage from
entering the ocean is more effective than removing
waste from the sea."
Change sentence 2 to: "The city of Baltimore has
really cool machine called Mr. Trash Wheel."
Change sentence 4 to: "Floating booms and a
conveyor belt help the machine work its magic."
Change sentence 5 to: "The belt takes a bunch of
the garbage from the water and then tosses it in a
dumpster."
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English, 22.06.2019 23:00, simon88
Hannah read two transgression myths—myths in which a character violates an important societal rule. in the first myth, the character who commits a transgression is killed by the gods. in the second myth, the character becomes the father of a cursed race of people. hannah needs to compare and contrast these two myths. she has written that “those who violate the rules will be punished with death.” which of the following is true of this observation? it applies to the second myth only. it applies to the first myth only. it applies to neither myth. it applies to both myths.
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