English, 22.04.2021 03:30 2021sherodisabella

Which statement best evaluates the effect of adding dialogue in the second version of the passage?
Passage 1:
Alex asked what kind of coasters I had ridden. When I told him I had
never ridden one, he couldn't believe it. Inside I was terrified, but my
voice held steady when I told Alex that roller coasters didn't scare me.
When Alex suggested we ride all 10 coasters at the park, I lied and told
him it was fine with me, as the coaster left the station with a whoosh.
Passage 2:
"You've never ridden a roller coaster?" Alex questioned.
"Never had the chance." The attendant checked the tension on the
coaster's lap bar. I tried to hide my panic because I didn't want to
embarrass myself in front of my new friend. "These rides don't really
scare me." Inside I was terrified, but my voice held steady.
"Good, 'cause I plan to ride all 10 coasters today!" exclaimed Alex. My
pulse raced faster
"Sounds good to me!" I screamed, as the coaster left the station with a

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