Monty is writing an argumentative text about not having exotic animals as pets. A classmate read an excerpt and suggested that Monty needs to strengthen his credibility. What are two changes Monty can make to strengthen the credibility of his paper?

Include direct quotes from animal experts about the cost and care of exotic pets.
Use stronger transitions between ideas.
Include facts about laws related to owning exotic animals.
Remove information about pet sanctuaries.
Share a personal story about visiting a zoo.

The major was a little man with upturned mustaches. he had been in the war in libya and wore two wound-stripes. he said that if the thing went well he would see that i was decorated. i said i hoped it would go well but that he was too kind. i asked him if there was a big dugout where the drivers could stay and he sent a soldier to show me. i went with him and found the dugout, which was very good. the drivers were with it and i left them there. what effect does hemingway’s limited use of adjectives have? it slows down the narration by interrupting the action. it makes the few descriptive words he does use more vivid and forceful. it makes the narrator seem powerless and insincere. it prevents the readers from filling in the details with their own experiences.