Read the sentence.
during the pizza party, mrs. saint-claire served the children on paper plates.
what is the best way to revise this sentence?
served on paper plates, mrs. saint-claire during the party gave pizza to the children.
mrs. saint-claire, during the pizza party, served the children on paper plates.
during the party, mrs. saint-claire served pizza on paper plates to the children.
the sentence is correct as written.

During the party, Mrs. Saint-Claire served pizza on paper plates to the children.

The original sentence is wrong because it makes it sound as though Mrs. Saint-Claire put children on paper plates and served the children as a meal to someone. This is also the same problem with the second option. The first option is wordy and unclear. The third option fixes the error by clarifying that pizza was put on the plate and then given to the children.

obama was told in early july 2004 that he was chosen to deliver the address, and he largely wrote the speech himself, with later edits from the kerry presidential campaign.

(the answer is d)

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