Me when this argument on global warming?
see attachment for the comment he wrote

points for his argument:

regardless of humans, global warming still happens due to the change in atmosphere

natural disasters such as volcanoes also contribute to global warming

against:

humans make global warming worse due to contribution to greenhouse gases e.g. coal mines, burning of fossil fuels, deforestation etc.

the earth gets warmer as these activities increase, showing the correlation.

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