Read the paragraph from a student’s critical analysis essay. in the declaration of independence, thomas jefferson states his thesis, which makes it seem important that the colonists get independence next, jefferson gives evidence against the king of england and how he mistreats american colonies. finally, jefferson suggests that colonists should stop paying taxes and fight, which is the obvious answer to the colonists' problems. what is the best way for the student to revise the essay

at the beginning of the story, elisa just has the small idea of wanting more attention, but as the story progressed, her desire for more attention grew larger. before she talked to the man with the wagon she was just focused on her chrysanthemums but when she talked to him and got some attention she enjoyed it, so she decided to get all dolled up for henry. but when they were on the way to dinner she was so upset because she saw the flowers on the side of the road and realized the man didn't take interest in her like she thought.