:amazing poems written by yourself needed, no love poems

I see the deadliest storm
I feel it's fullest perfection
I hauled my ghost to see
Just how the corpses appear to be
No longer hollow and empty of color
But instead
Light has replaced their misery
And just knowing that i helped to kill
That little part they hated
Was a new world I learned and embraced
So i stopped raving again
And started to break my chain
To escape this wavering reflection
And create a new one

Stop stop stop stop stop stop stop stop

Are you asking for a opinion ? if so i believe that a speaker should be genuine and honest about what they're saying and should be factual