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music is awesome. it makes me feel alive and happy and everything good. heres some the way the music affects me. i always have been around music. for as long as i could remember i have been in love with jazz and pop.
later on, i would adapt more to jazz music. my first ever favorite jazz artist was lena horne. i could listen to her till the sun set. she would lift me and get me in better moods. i could always depend on her music if nobody else.
i could recite her songs word from word as if i wrote for her. if she came on in the car i would basically jump out the sunroof because of my energy. all in all, music is a fantastic thing. it makes me feel alive and happy and everything good. i don’t know what i would do without music!
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