Good dialogue includes all of the following except for?
mannerisms of speech that are unique to each character.
varied sentence lengths and structures.
perfect grammar and punctuation.
incomplete sentences and interupted sentences.

The correct answer is "incomplete sentences and interupted sentences".

Explanation:

Good dialogue implies the accomplishment of all what is needed to assure that the speaker and the listener are properly receiving the message. Incomplete sentences and interrupted sentences often results in confusion, which avoids that the message is properly received and avoids that good dialogue takes place.

the right ones are in bold.

daintly refers to the fact she was reaching for what she ate, not necessarily what she is like.

greatest charm as in she possessed (=had) the greatest charm.

pleasant (her demeanor)

speaking (of her sensibility)

dead refers to the hypothetical mouse.

bleeding refers to the hypothetical mouse.

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