Ineed and opinion. is there anything i should change? do you like it? is it bad?

it's called becoming a warrior

you didn't give any devotion
now i'm drowning in an ocean
of a mast of pain an emotion.
the mixture of my feelings
need an angel for healing
i need a knight
to teach me to become a warrior.
i need a fight
to someday be glorious.
i will be strong
nothing can go wrong.
i'll do my best,
i won't even rest,
till i reach the end.