Afamous chocolate company have chosen you as the winner of their online competition to suggest an interesting new flavour for their chocolate. the prize is a visit for you and a friend to their chocolate factory in switzeland . write an email at least 100 words and:
- the company for choosing your suggestion as the winner
- say how you feel about the prize
-ask about dates, travel arrangements and accommodation
- ask for confirmation that your friend will also travel and stay for free
writting focus
an email asking for information and clarification
*start the email politely
- dear sir or dear madam
*do not use
- abbreviations: you (must not: )
-informal phrases : several, a number of (must not : lots of)
-contractions : i am (not must: i'm)
*if the first paragraph refer to the letter / email/advert you are resposing to and say why you are writing .
- you for your letter/emailinforming me that ../
- i am could you clarify to enquire about /ask
*in the main body paragraphs , use polite expressions ( e. g.indirect questions) to ask for information.
-i would (also) like to know what need to bring
-could i ask about the dates and times of the next course?
* if something is unclear ,ask for clarification.
- contacting you which levels are available?
-could you confirm/explain /when/where/what/how/whether/
*if the final paragraph mention that you would like a reply
-i look forward to receiving your reply soon.
-i hope to hear from you soon,