English, 31.01.2020 15:50 24chrim

Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. what is wrong with it?

claim: the aztec empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the inca empire.

i. introduction
ii. aztec empire
a. political developments
b. social developments
c. cultural developments
iii. inca empire
a. political developments
b. social developments
iv. conclusion

a. it is missing a body.
b. the section about the inca empire needs to address cultural developments.
c. the claim does not present an opinion.
d. the organization is not clear and focused.

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