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rewrite the paragraph, making sure to do the following.

replace all the blue nouns with stronger nouns that do a better job identifying the objects. (it is ok to use more words than were used originally.) you can replace more than the ones that are marked.
replace all the green verbs with stronger verbs that do a better job identifying the actions involved. (it is ok to use more words than were used originally.) you can replace more than the ones that are marked.
add colorful and vivid adjectives and adverbs that will improve the image of the scene.
replace overused nouns with pronouns.

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Read the passage from a raisin in the sun. mama: lord have mercy, baby. you done gone and bought your grandmother a hat? travis (very proud): open it! she does and lifts out an elaborate, but very elaborate, wide gardening hat, and all the adults break up at the sight of it. ruth: travis, honey, what is that? travis (who thinks it is beautiful and appropriate): it's a gardening hat! like the ladies always have on in the magazines when they work in their gardens. beneatha (giggling fiercely): travis—we were trying to make mama mrs. miniver—not scarlett o'hara! mama (indignantly): what's the matter with you all! this here is a beautiful hat! (absurdly.) i always wanted me one just like it! which word or phrase from the text best supports the idea that the adults think the hat is inappropriate? “have mercy” (giggling fiercely) (indignantly) “what’s the matter”