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English, 26.10.2019 05:43 smortandsons

Can you proof read my autobiography

my name is paulina romo i was born on april 14, 2002. i came from hispanics parents; my parents came from mexico. i was born and raised in milwaukee wisconsin. in my first year of school, i attended henry w. longfellow school. then i transferred to franklin pierce elementary school for k5. then around the month of april, i fractured my left arm by jumping off the monkey bars. i didn't tell my teachers that i fractured my arm. then i got home and i told my mom that i was sick. then she made me soup i started eating with my right arm, then my dad told me to stop playing and just eat. then he saw my swollen and told my mom to take me to the hospital. then after six months, it healed, i fractured my right arm. then again, i didn't tell my teacher when i got home this time my dad came early from work. i tried to hide my arm and he noticed and told my mom that i fractured my other arm, then again they took me to the hospital. in the time i wore a cast they me in the things i couldn’t do but i wanted to be independent. although i was only six years, so i told them to stop me because and that i was a big girl and they stopped . since that day i always wanted to be independent about what i did. in my last year of pierce, i got a president education award. then in middle school, i went to lincoln center of the arts. where i joined the ambassador choir for three years. i attended the annual tree ceremony three times in a row. then in eighth grade, i joined the orchestra at the same time i was in a choir. when i had the completion ceremony, i got my second president education award. i started babysitting in the summer for people and i babysat children in churches. in the summer i started writing a books on wattpad and i found my true passion of writing. although a lot of people don’t know about my writing, i like to keep it that way because i'm afraid of what would they say. then currently i am in 9th grade attending south division high school. my current class rank is 2 out of 457 and my current gpa is 3.7143

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