I've always dreamed of designing formula one race cars for a living. as a kid, i'd spend hours watching the races, drawing the cars, and building elaborate models. i was a pretty good soccer player, but not as good as my older brother. during high school, i worked very hard studying physics and learning about aerodynamics. i spent summers visiting races and talking to the drivers about what was important to them in a race car.
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a. contains spelling errors.
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c. is not logically ordered.
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