Avoiding shift in person: you may write a paper in:
first person—i, we
second person—you
third person—he, she, they, one, anyone, a person, people
which sentence needs revision because it contains a pronoun shift?
a) it had been a long day. luckily, the father knew where to find his hidden keys. he was inside of his house in no time.
b) when assembling a bicycle, one should read the directions carefully. otherwise you might be very disappointed with the results.
c) looking for a decent job can be depressing. however, as a rule a person can find work if he is willing to take what he can get.
d) anyone interested in more information may call this number. each caller will receive a reply as soon as possible.