Which sentence in the passage should be revised for wordiness?

you have probably heard someone say that breakfast is the most important meal of the day. this statement is true. liz fair field reports in perfect health magazine, "breakfast your body to get going so that you have plenty of energy to start the day.” however, researchers warn against starting the day with foods that are high in calories, sugar, and fat. in other words, eating a piece of toast, either plain, with butter, or with peanut butter and with a side of fresh fruit, such as a banana, a plum, or an apple, for breakfast is better than eating doughnuts, candy, or ice cream. not eating a healthy breakfast can cause iron deficiency, which can cause a person to have a high body mass index (bmi) and lead to obesity.

The sentence that should be revised for wordiness is "In other words, eating a piece of toast, either plain, with butter, or with peanut butter and with a side of fresh fruit, such as a banana, a plum, or an apple, for breakfast is better than eating doughnuts, candy, or ice cream."

Explanation:

Wordiness means taking longer than what is necessary to get to the point. It happens when we use redundant expressions or simply when we use too many words. That is precisely the case in the sentence above. There are too many words, too many foods, being cited to get to the point. Just a couple of examples would suffice to make it clear that caloric foods are not the best option for breakfast.

english novelist and poet, the eldest of the three brontë sisters who survived into adulthood and whose novels became classics of english literature.

she enlisted in school at roe head in january 1831, aged 14 years. she left the year after to teach her sisters, emily and anne, at home, returning in 1835 as a governess. in 1839 she undertook the role as governess for the sidgwick family, but left after a few months to return to haworth where the sisters opened a school, but failed to attract pupils. instead they turned to writing and they each first published in 1846 under the pseudonyms of currer, ellis and acton bell. her first novel the professor was rejected by publishers, her second novel jane eyre was published in 1847. the sisters admitted to their bell pseudonyms in 1848, and by the following year were celebrated in london literary circles.

brontë experienced the early deaths of all her siblings. she became pregnant shortly after her marriage in june 1854 but died on 31 march 1855, almost certainly from hyperemesis gravidarum, a complication of pregnancy which causes excessive nausea and vomiting.

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