Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. how would you improve it?

claim: the aztec empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the inca empire.

i. introduction
ii. aztec empire
a. political developments
b. social developments
c. cultural developments
iii. conclusion

a. use more colorful language.
b. have the conclusion immediately following the introduction
c. introduce new arguments in the conclusion.
d. add a section about the inca empire.

Read the summary of the first three paragraphs of “the world on turtle’s back.”[1] in the beginning, there was no land, only the great ocean. [2] the sky-world, the home of the gods, was above the ocean. [3] a sacred tree stood at the center. [4] one of the gods pulled out some of its roots for his pregnant wife. [5] this created a hole in the floor of the sky-world. [6] the man's wife fell through the hole toward the ocean below, clutching the roots in her hand. which is the best way to combine sentences 4 and 5? a) one of the gods pulled out some of its roots for his pregnant wife, which created a hole in the floor of the sky-world. b) one of the gods pulled out some of its roots for his pregnant wife, he created a hole in the floor of the sky-world. c) one of the gods pulled out some of its roots for his pregnant wife which created a hole in the floor of the sky-world. d) one of the gods pulled out some of its roots for his pregnant wife he created a hole in the floor of the sky-world.