What key detail should be added to strengthen the student’s paraphrasing of this excerpt from odyssey?

my home is on the peaked sea-mark of ithaca

under mount neion's wind-blown robe of leaves,

in sight of other islands- dulichium,

same, wooded zacynthus- ithaca

being most lofty in that coastal sea,

and northwest, while the rest lie east and south.

a rocky isle, but good for a boy's training;

i shall not see on earth a place more dear,