Which of these comments would be the MOST helpful in a peer review? "This is a great description because it includes a lot of details and interesting words."
"This is a great description--it gives enough details that I can imagine the way each object looks and feels."
"This is a great description. But you need to add details."
"You need to add transitional tags to your quotes."​

Its the last one hope this helped

themselves

an intensive pronoun is a pronoun that ends in self or selves, such as himself, herself, themselves, yourself, ourselves. since band members is a third person plural, the correct intensive pronoun would be themselves. if the band was talked about as a collective noun, itself would be the appropriate intensive pronoun. intensive pronouns are used to add emphasis to the noun it's modifying which is why it directly follows it.

- "d.)  describe the iroquois belief of how the earth was created. for the iroquois, there was no reason to explain the importance of rituals. also, as animists, they didn't need a special elaboration as to why animals are important or why they had a crucial role in the earth's creation. this is just an authentic myth that explains the creation of the earth. every culture has produced creation myths."