Please Help me to find all the error there are 6 mistakes please help me to find them thanks y’all

1. major (line 2)  

2. her (line 3)  

3. they (line 3)  

4. her (line 5)

5. her (line 7)  

6. as (line 8 - first as)

Explanation:

From the given passage, I was able to find out the 6 mistakes/errors found there.  

In line 2, the word "major" is an error which isn't needed in the sentence. In line 3, it is meant to be "their" and not "her". Also, in the same line 3, it is supposed to be "It" and not "They". In line 5, it is supposed to be "their" and not "her". In line 7, the word "her" is an error which shouldn't have been added. In line 8, the first "as" is an error which shouldn't have been added in the sentence.

? ? what can you explain this to me i am so confused