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English, 31.03.2021 23:30 caitlin89

One of your classmates has asked you to help her revise a speech that she will be giving about the importance of family. Revise her speech in the following ways: 1. Make the speech formal.

2. Add instructions to indicate where the visual images should be shown to the audience, choosing images from the ones below. (For example, [Show image of fireworks].) Be sure to select at least two of the images, and make sure that they're relevant and helpful.

3. Make the details more specific to help strengthen the speech. You may add supporting details as needed, even if you make them up.
NOTE: Underline any lines you copy from her original speech.

Speech:
Some people may think that a family is just a boring group of people they are related to. Family is an important group of people, in my opinion. One reason I love my family is they've got my back when times get tough. One time I fell off my bike when I was a little kid and I broke my leg. I was hurting real bad and had to be in the hospital for a long time. Over a month long. My dad, mom, and kid sister came to see me every day. They brought me stuff to keep my busy: books, games, magazines, we watched TV. My family supported me. Families are great!

I'll mark brainliest, and 50 points

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