Select which three words or phrases in the following sentences are used incorrectly. I looked more hard, but I still could not see the page any gooder than I had before. Losing
was worst than when I forgot to use the better of my two glass cleaners and my glasses were
day!

The three wrong words or phrases are More Hard, Gooder and Worst.

Explanation:

The correction for the sentence is...

I looked HARDER, but I still could not see the page any BETTER than I had before. Losing was WORSE than when I forgot to use the better of my two glass cleaners and my glasses were day.

i would need to know the specific part of the passage your referring to ?

figurative language is a resource that fiction writers use to make better descriptions of what they want to write about or express. they can improve their stories, as they can elaborate more vivid and colorful sentences. this way, the reader will be able to have more detailed images in his/her mind.

places, objects, people and even feelings or emotions can be described with a lot of detail to metaphors, similes and personifications. making different kinds of comparisons to make a description more specific, as well as assigning human qualities to non-human objects (and vice-versa) can be very useful for science fiction writers.  

on the other hand, alliterations allow writers to elaborate more entertaining and creative sentences. it consists in using a sequence of words that start with the same consonant letter. they can be used to emphasize something important the writer wants to express, or just as a fun literary device.