What important difference do you observe between the original thesis statement and the revised version (“As these works show, positive thinking is one of the best ways to respond to conflict, as well as an effective path to healing for those who survive physical abuse or hardship at the hands of others”)? a)The original statement does not include the exact words from the prompt.

b)The original statement is too short and does not include enough detail.

c)The original statement is too specific and does not state a claim related to the prompt.

d)The original statement does not provide or share any of the writer’s reasoning and evidence.

Read this excerpt from we’ve got a job: the 1963 children’s march. then, in 1958, when he was nine, his mother got a job as a dental assistant – and a raise. at about the same time, wash got a job, too. six days a week for eight years, he woke up by four o'clock in the morning to deliver milk. by the time he got to school each day, he'd already put in almost half a day's work. how does this excerpt readers make a personal connection to the story? by connecting readers to his mother’s medical training by connecting readers to the milk-delivery business by connecting readers to wash’s academic success by connecting readers to wash’s daily work routine